Iron Man Vol. 3 #73
"THE BEST DEFENSE PART 1: ACQUISITION"
As with all my “production notes,” consider a “Spoiler Warning” attached. Please read the books first.
first chapter went through more drafts than any in the entire storyline.
The real bugaboo was the scene with Captain America. It was vital for new readers that Tony's compunctions about defense work be restated; and vital for the story for someone to make him question those compunctions. I decided in the beginning this should be a casual discussion between the two heroes during a rescue, underlining how mundane, how matter-of-fact, risk-taking had become for them.
The trouble is, every "background" crisis I came up with early on turned out to be too noisy or too distracting to have worked credibly on the page. Only on the fourth try did I light on an undersea rescue — suitable, since all is otherwise silence here. In retrospect it turned out to be a helpful choice, as it brought the Navy into the story and underlined the scope and variety of the Defense Department's work.
The story is 22 pages, one more than it technically should have had with the recap page there — but it had a lot of ground to cover. As a result, it's got more panels than any other issue of the storyline.
I was thrilled with Jorge Lucas' interpretation of the story. It has super-hero action, real-life military vehicles and settings, and more mundane conversations between grown-ups - and he proved more than equal to all three.
Jorge Lucas lives and works in Argentina, which meant a lot of conversations back and forth between us about the look of settings and equipment. I haven't got a clue how all this was done before the Internet, but for the most part, we tried to play things as straight as possible. When you're telling a story about a super-hero seeking to join The Cabinet, it can get silly in a hurry - so really depicting the world as credibly as possible is very important to staying on the tightrope.
A surprise for me came in the use of the real-life President. I was prepared to keep things more distant — Tony dealing with Stu Conrad instead — but I was assured that in the Marvel Universe in 2003, George W. Bush is president. And there he is.
Some have observed that I'm making some kind of statement about how farsighted and imaginative — or how silly and reckless — that incumbent is with this story. They're welcome to their own interpretations, but the fact is the story is told as it would have been with a fictional, never-seen-on-panel President.
- A coincidence no one noticed. until people began searching for the issue on eBay: My work on Crimson Dynamo got me the Iron Man gig, which started with #73 of the third volume of that series. There was no #73 in the second volume, but there was one in the first volume. That issue's villain: Crimson Dynamo...
- Illustrating the international nature of the weapons business, Jorge Lucas put signage in multiple languages in the background of the defense show. A real Italian company's address and phone number snuck in on one sign!
- You can't see it because the balloons cover it, but the Assembly Center is selling "Defense Dogs" at the contractors' convention. They're supposed to be $3 each, but cost overruns drive them up to $27.55...
- I may have sent readers back to their 1980s issues looking for Sonny Burch in the Stane International sequences; I have to confess he isn't there. He's modeled on the many, many bureaucrats within his own company and others that Tony Stark ran up against over the decades - and as most of them were so faceless no one remembers their names, I figured I'd insert this one more in the past.
- Cross Technologies, where Sonny Burch and some of the bad equipment came from, has been around at Marvel for awhile. Hawkeye worked there as a security consultant in his first miniseries.
- I had no trouble figuring out which defense plant to send Captain America to in the flashback: My grandmother was a "riveting Rosie" at North American Aviation in Texas. I had actually described some workers including one who could be her in my script, but Jorge chose to set the scene outside, with Cap meeting WAVEs rather than factory workers.
- Captain America's tour with the ordnance evacuation unit was something I really would have liked more room to explore, had the story not needed to keep moving. Ernie Pyle filed a number of interesting stories from behind the lines with the ordnance evac guys, and the story of the booby-trapped .88 is inspired by one. Look for "Ernie's War," certainly still in print somewhere, for more about this interesting time...
- I read somewhere that Sonny Burch's office would really be in the "C" or middle ring of the Pentagon. But we have yet to hear from anyone calling us on the balloon placement...
- The patent law discussion is no joke: There are "sealed patents" and it's possible to lose them. The Section 182 reference really exists. My reading of the law might well be wrong in some way, but hey, maybe the Marvel version's different.
- The patented gadgets Tony names — repulsor plasma generator, three-axis steering magnet array, thermo-electric energy converter — are "real" parts of the older armors, as described by Eliot Brown in the old Official Handbook of the Marvel Universe. There may be something from the Iron Manual in there, too.
- The guy with the poll numbers on the last page is Artie Pithins, who's more formally reintroduced in #74. Some may have assumed this is Vice President Dick Cheney, but the veep probably has more hair.