Iron Man Vol. 3 #80
"THE DEEP END, PART 2: MAGIC BULLETS"
As with all my “production notes,” consider a “Spoiler Warning” attached. Please read the books first.
metal-to-acid bioweapon described here was inspired by a 1998
Scientific American article on a real metal-to-acid bug living in a
pretty foul river in Spain — as was the notion, floated in the
following issue, that there's a fungus that can exist in symbiosis with
it (and thus permit Vitriol to get near the stuff).
Given that the location of the story was in Iraq — where the vehicles were in desert camouflage — we were going to be looking at a lot of browns and yellows this issue no matter what we did. I was torn over how to suggest the mutant substance be colored, going from green to red before settling on orange, which, while not as high-contrast, probably said "fiery acid" a little more.
One of the reasons I wanted to get Tony Stark "into the field" quickly was to get him in contact with actual soldiers — to make the professional army less an abstract thing for him. The conversation about outfitting issues — about some soldiers using batting gloves — is based on reports from the theater last year that made it into the media. These sorts of practical concerns struck me as the small-scale counterweights to the huge-scale big thinking Tony had already engaged in.
It was gratifying to receive a note from a reader, following "Deep End," who thanked me for trying to make the soldiers and their concerns seem human, given that some comics (and movies and TV shows) don't. As the son of a Marine and with several friends in the various services, I wouldn't have considered doing otherwise.
- I actually found a sign for the Baghdad airport written in Arabic and traced a rough facsimile of it for Phillip for the sign in the first panel. I'm not that good at tracing, though, so that sign might read as a recipe for falafel.
- I actually heard a soldier in real life refer to the hinterlands of Iraq as "Indian country", prompting the exchange Tony has with the general.
- I had a military Humvee model on my desk while writing this episode, giving me the inspiration for the SATV. Though I like the design, I just had to melt it in #81: anyone who remembers the Spider-Mobile experience from years gone by has to look at all super-hero vehicles as something where a little goes a long way. But if they need an extra toy for the line, here's a candidate...